I'm not premium, so I can't post a critique like your requested. I really like the picture... but I think that if you wanted to show those eyes (incredibly beautiful eyes by the way)... you should give them some more light... maybe it's only my perception... cause if you wanted to show the skin... also perfect... the picture has nothing to critique about. Anyway... the eyes seems to be sad... or watching something on her mind, it's probably the most important detail on the picture, even with that perfect face... and there's no enough light to show it.
Maybe, if you put the light going through the face over the eyes... and not cutting it in the middle... try it... and if you do it, and you like it... send it to me please.
If you don't wanted to have critiques like comments... delete it. no problem.
oh... thanks for replying. It's right... if you add more light digitaly you make the picture looks fake. If you'd like to see how it's looks like I recommend to take the shot again. That's the better way.. but I think it's worthless. Maybe works just like a thing to have in mind in another picture.
By the way... beautiful eyes.. If you were my model, I'd focus them on every shot.